Wednesday, May 21, 2014

W.S. Merwin's unpunctuated lines

I am indeed intrigued by the flow of Merwin's poems. The lack of punctuation does not hinder us from reading his poems. In fact the absence of punctuation creates a natural flow of breath that is calming. Each poem feels like a wind that has gently swept around you.
How does he do this? If we look at his poem, "The Latest Thing," the main clause in the first line that runs to the middle of the second, is followed by two subordinate clauses, which ends I imagine with a colon, because what follows is a list. This is followed by a complete sentence. And there are no punctuation marks to indicate any of this, but the absence of punctuation does not hinder our understanding of the poem.
The opening lines are intriguing: In the cities the birds are forgotten /among other things but then one could say /that the cities are made of absences / of what disappeared..."
We catch are breath a little before the end of the poem in "one white note plays on to prevent memory",
then the final line, "naturally forgetting its own song".

Saturday, May 10, 2014

Vijay Seshadri's "Imaginary Number"

I was pleasantly surprised when I heard last month that Vijay Sashadri won the Pulitzer Prize in Poetry for his book Three Sections. I have ordered the book and am waiting eagerly for it to arrive. In the meanwhile, I am reading some of his poems on the web. One poem that is included in Three Sections and was published a few years ago in Poetry, is "Imaginary Number." It reminds me of poems by Dickinson and Anna Swir, the ease with which they talked about the soul, as if it was their best friend out taking a walk or a child that was up to some mischief. "Imaginary Number" begins with a planetary devastation that leaves only a mountain standing, which therefore challenges the idea of comparisons--big/small, since the there is nothing to compare the mountain to, resulting in the soul feeling appeased. But the poet is not satisfied at voicing this profound philosophical truth that comparisons are relative, they create stress for human beings, and the disappearance of comparisons spells relief. The poet's insight occurs in the turn of the poem:

"The soul,

like the square root of minus 1,
is an impossibility that has its uses."
We are left contemplating the following questions: What is the square root of minus 1? Is the soul an impossibility? Is it an impossibility because it is intangible? Is the soul useless or useful? When does the soul become useful? What are the instances of its uselessness? 
 I like to think that poetry is refreshingly useless.  But poetry could have its uses--such as diverting you from suicide (as happens in The Hours when Laura upon reading Mrs. Dalloway changes her mind about committing suicide). The soul--unlike poetry--is intangible, impossible, has no this-ness, no substance, but keeps us together despite our near-devastating experience of being flung between our largeness and our smallness, between what-a-piece-of-work-is-man and a-tale-told-by-an-idiot-signifying-nothing.